直击赴美**现场:我为啥被拒?
?小龙闯非洲?
2024-11-16 16:35:52
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me:rutgers university. 分析:在常理上,开场问题只要正面回答就ok了,但是如果vo并没有要打断你的意思,申请者可以为以后问题的回答作些铺垫,比如进一步地说一下自己的在美国的学习计划。 vo:ok, and what are you going to study? 分析:对于申请者学习计划的考察。 me: excuse me?(此时没弄明白,以为她还在问我去啥学校?后来发现是问我学啥?) vo: i mean what are you going to study there? me:oh, in the first two years,i will study general courses and then i plan to major in sociology. 分析:这里申请者的回答是有效的回答,但是可以再多做点铺垫说明,比如具体阐述一下自己为什么要学习sociology的原因,以显示出自己出国目的的明确性。 vo:ok,who will surport you? me:my father and my mother and my uncle.(由于一点点紧张,居然不说my parents,而说了my father and my mother~) vo: what do your parents do? me:my father ** a general manager of a company,the company sells chemicals used in water-cleaning systems in big hotels and factories. my mother works in the ** department.her job ** to test silk or cottons…(最后她打断我,好像不在乎我后面说的内容了) 分析:这里的回答我已经在上面做了具体的提议。父亲自己拥有企业,可以围绕这个来说明自己赴美资金的充足性,加之母亲在**部门从事的工作年薪也是不错的收入,并要在陈述的同时,递给vo相关的工作以及收入证明。 vo:how much ** their income? me:my father has an annual income of over 250,000 and my mother has 70,000.(说数字的时候,停顿了一下,因为没把数字的英文念法练熟) vo:where does your uncle live? me: he lives in new jersey.(老实交待) vo: oh? has he came back before? 分析:vo此时考察的侧重点是:uncle与申请者家庭之间的关心程度,进而做出判断,是否可以相信uncle的资助真实性与客观性。建议申请者此时应当着重说明一下在美国的uncle与自己家庭的关系融洽亲密程度,比如:uncle多次经常性的回国探望亲属,还经常通过电话建立联系沟通等等以便让vo相信uncle提供资助的客观性。 me: yes, several times.(还是老实交待) vo: when? me:the nearest time ** in april. vo:hmmm,interesting...(这一段是极为让我不解的地方——) vo:can i see your finance certificates? me:sure! vo: the bank s**ings has only been there for only 3 month, and i can not see where do they come from.can you tell me where do they come from? me:oh,they 're from several other bank account~ vo:can i see the bank book? me:ok.(给她一本中银的存折和一本工行的存折,但是里面的出入账目都是比较大的——我的硬伤……) 分析:既然申请者知道自己资金方面的缺陷,就应当在准备的时候多下点工夫,比如:解释一下家里的资金大部分用于父亲企业的周转,只是在需要的时候才会这么大数量地存入;其次再对父亲企业的规模、年收益、经营状况作点小小的说明解释,是应该可以让vo信服这笔大额近期存款的来源的。 vo:still,i can not see the resouce of your s**ings.i'm very sorry but i can not **sue you the v**a today. me: excuse me,but my uncle's support has covered most of my tuition and living expenses, and my parent's annual income ** well enough to cover the rest part! vo: i'm sorry but if you can not provide proofs of where your money comes from,i am not able to **sue you the v**a. me:oh, then ** it mean that if i can bring the h**tory of the money,i can pass? vo:i'm sorry but i can not help you with th**. me:...ok,thank you all the same. 分析:申请者此次被拒签的原因很明显——大额近期存入的资金来源解释不清楚。从申请者的资金背景来看,他家庭的资金状况完全可以支持他在美期间的学习生活费用,但是对于资金来源的解释上不是很清晰明确,使得vo对于他资金的来源产生怀疑。针对他的这种状况,我提供以下方式进行解释说明: 1.以父亲自己的公司为主要依据,在**过程中着重解释说明父亲企业的具体状况,比如:说明父亲公司的具体业务类型、他在其中担任的职位、年收益水平等。并提供公司相关的介绍材料、营业执照的副本、父亲的名片、企业缴税证明(可以针对具体经营状况对企业的税收进行包装)。自己家存款的往来历史,可以从相对应的银行开出往来详单,抛售的股票,可以从代理自己家股票的证券公司开出证明。 20210311