我首先奉你在“自我简介”中的要求——把中文先改得更地道些。我认为中文中主要存在的问题是:完全可以简短的语句却写得太修长。并且有一处我要特此说明一下:在开幕词中你写到了你目前剩余的可送出的积分,其实我估计以后又会有其它很多朋友来参加这个基金会,他们肯定在参加前才来看你这个开幕词,这样的话,你所说的剩余积分也许就不能和那时的真正的剩余积分对上号了。所以我把那句话删掉了。如果实在想加上,就在文章末尾注明日期吧。还有,我把文章的结尾改得更像结尾了。最后我还想说一下:生僻的“僻”你给写成“辟”了。好了,现在请看改后的文章:百度知道外语与自然科学原创奖励基金会开幕词 知道是一个知识与创意的交流**,然而重复提问、抄袭之风日盛,这造成很多一无能事的网友专家也雄居高位。为此,我在保证十四级状元级别的前提下,将多余积分大量送出,鼓励原创答案。积分用完后我会努力再赚回来。 该基金会由美丽的洛阳私人承办,侧重于外语版和自然科学版中没有固定答案的难题,每日都有一道百分题目。为避免逐个给朋友们发送消息的繁琐劳动(实际上这么做也不公平,因为各有所长),又能消除朋友们在茫茫题海中寻找题目的麻烦,每日的百分大题链接均在我的“自我简介”中公布。 我对积分兴趣不大,也无故意炒作之嫌。我认为科学研究的目的,在于解决至今尚无标准答案的问题,而不是已经存在答案的问题,这样才能从中看出一个人的实力。《十万个为什么》显然是低级趣味、仅适合小学教育的东西。只有从社会大学中,才能找到真正的“为什么”并锻炼自己的大脑。 当然,对于自然科学版里的问题,太生僻、枯燥的数学计算会影响大家的积极性,所以我尽量提问有趣的、实用性较强的题目,譬如生物柴油、秸秆利用、白色污染以及垃圾回收、资源昆虫养殖等。祝愿大家能抛弃“唯积分论”的局限性。宁花一整天答一个有趣味的,也不答一分钟就能找到答案的。总之,热情欢迎大家的参与这个基金会!有了大家的支持,这个基金会定会变得日益繁荣、兴盛,最终达到艺术与科学的顶峰!(其实我改动的并不多)我的翻译如下:百度知道外语与自然科学原创奖励基金会开幕词foundation in respect of rewards for originative answerer with regard to foreign languages and natural sciences in baidu zhidao知道是一个知识与创意的交流**,然而重复提问、抄袭之风日盛,这造成很多一无能事的专家也雄居高位。为此,我在保证十四级状元级别的前提下,将多余积分大量送出,鼓励原创答案。积分用完后我会努力再赚回来。zhidao ** a platform for exchanges with knowledge and originality. however, the climate of repeated askings and copies ** flour**hing increasingly, which makes great quantities of incompetent special**ts occupy a commanding position as well. for th**, i give out my spare points on the prerequ**ite of my four**-degree number one scholar ship so that originative answerer can be encouraged.该基金会由美丽的洛阳私人承办,侧重于外语和自然科学版中没有固定答案的难题,每日都有一道百分题目。为避免逐个给朋友们发送消息的繁琐劳动(实际上这么做也不公平,因为各有所长),又能消除朋友们在茫茫题海中寻找题目的麻烦,每日的百分大题链接均在我的“自我简介”中公布。th** foundation ** held personally by beautiful luoyang, which tend to contain everyday one-hundred-point non-certain-answer questions in the breakdown of foreign languages and natural sciences. in order to **oid the soph**ticated work of sending ** to guys (th** ** also unfair in fact because every man has h** merits) and also being able to eliminate the trouble for guys to look for the questions in the vast crowd, the one-hundred-point question ** promulgated in my personal introduction every day.我对积分兴趣不大,也无故意炒作之嫌。我认为科学研究的目的,在于解决至今尚无标准答案的问题,而不是已经存在答案的问题,这样才能从中看出一个人的实力。《十万个为什么》显然是低级趣味、仅适合小学教育的东西。只有从社会大学中,才能找到真正的“为什么”并锻炼自己的大脑。i am not very interested in points and do not h**e the suspicion of sensationalization on purpose as well. i think that the intention of scientific research ** to solve problems which there are not any certain answers to but not ones that there h**e already been answers to, and only th** way can a person’s actual strength be d**cerned. “hundred thousand whys” ** obviously vulgar-interest thing that ** just suitable for schooling for primary school. only from social universities can people find the real whys and temper their brains.当然,对于自然科学版里的问题,太生僻、枯燥的数学计算会影响大家的积极性,所以我尽量提问有趣的、实用性较强的题目,譬如生物柴油、秸秆利用、白色污染以及垃圾回收、资源昆虫养殖等。of course, as for the questions in the breakdown of natural science, too uncommon and boring mathematical calculation can influence your activity, therefore i ask interesting and practical questions, such as creatural diesel oil, using of straw, recycle of rubb**h, resource insect cultivation, as far as possible.祝愿大家能抛弃“唯积分论”的局限性。宁花一整天答一个有趣味的,也不答一分钟就能找到答案的。may you be able to abandon the limitation of “point**m”(这是我根据构词法自创的一个单词,如觉得不合适,就还按正常的来翻译). and would rather spend a whole day answering a interesting question than on one whose answer can be find just in one minute.总之,热情欢迎大家的参与这个基金会!有了大家的支持,这个基金会定会变得日益繁荣、兴盛,最终达到艺术与科学的顶峰!generally speaking, you are welcome to participate in th** foundation! with your support, th** foundation will sure to become more prosperous and flour**hing, and finally reach the top of both art and science.我突然发现我好辛苦呀。不过为了这个基金会的成功,我是永远会尽我最大的努力的。谢谢! 20210311
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